Tonewise I have no particular criticism: maybe a little too much low frequencies in the mix for my tastes, but nothing "wrong" in this.
About the playing: vibratos.
This is one thing that lacks in your performances (not only this one): they are almost inaudible.
To catch the right amount try to exagerate them and find an happy medium.
Fast runs (3 notes for string): in this song and in the others you posted they have always the same ritmic division and each 3 seems non "glued" with the following 3.
Try to slow them down until you can play them like they flow without unnecessary pauses.
You are a good player and I hear costant inprovement in your playing abilities, you need to address this little things and you will step up to another level.
P.S. English is not my native language so my post could be a little messy. Ask if anything is not clear and I'll try to explain me better.